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Caught me at a good time, dear
in emasculated rhyme, fear
otherwise I'd be out of line,
as it was I was fine.

Let's just keep it on the ground
(I was probably in the basement)
Carry it to our burial mound
(in alcohol-induced stupor)
Leave it in the lost-and-found
It's not mine.
©2009-2010 ~synthwrr
:iconsynthwrr:

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Shortie. The rhyming amused me.

Plus she has a boyfriend so I like the double meaning :)

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:iconvelnon:
I did get a very playful sense from it, although burial mound is such an awkward word so the rhyming seems forced but it flows very well though

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Ink crumbs give inklings
:iconsynthwrr:
hmm... well, it's on-theme and on-meter, and a cool little way to say "graves," I mean it's a little forced of course... but I'm willing to accept that, hahah.

Thanks for reading :)

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